http://jezziejay.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jezziejay.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] flywoman 2011-02-22 01:16 am (UTC)

I did review this at length, but apparently 'Frank's been nibbling at the wires', and he ate the comment in the process.

Anyway, it was pretty much just a repeat of what I already said to you. I really like the new ending - it's hard enough for Wilson 'in the moment' without even trying to think about tomorrow. I couldn't even think about the 'tomorrow'.

Beautifully done, and, as always, beautifully written :)

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