http://yarroway.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] yarroway.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] flywoman 2011-02-21 08:24 am (UTC)

I like how everything progresses naturally and the tension builds to the end. Your resolution is completely in keeping with canon and the characters. They way they connect and then disconnect is exactly how it goes on the show, and the fic is even more effective for that reason.
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