Thank you - I do appreciate the compliment (it's one I've paid a number of times after trying something with a premise that made me leery).
I must confess that I struggled with the tense - second person made more sense originally because of a later scene with Wilson that I ended up not including. Glad to hear that it didn't ruin the piece for you, though.
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Date: 2010-11-13 11:35 pm (UTC)I must confess that I struggled with the tense - second person made more sense originally because of a later scene with Wilson that I ended up not including. Glad to hear that it didn't ruin the piece for you, though.