oh, I love how you love the complexities of the hook-up. I watched a lot of the world cup - most of it - and I wonder if you should maybe sequel this now? :D
Lovely little into, with just enough said to lay out the disappointment, and the isolation of such a loss. I always think that even though the team loses, the loss must be very individual, especially as Ronaldo will be 33 the next time he's on this stage.
And then Messi - I love Messi - and I really enjoyed him here. You described him perfectly - with his close-cropped hair, his incipient wrinkles, the ugly tattoo clasping the back of his bare calf. His t-shirt is plain but clean and actually fits him, clinging to the slight slopes of his pecs, the flat plane of his stomach, before it disappears beneath his shorts. But his maturity is even more evidenced by the confident way he plants his feet and by the steady gaze that he has trained on Cris, determination in his close-set brown eyes.
And then the hot, angsy sex. Nicely done! The ending was beautifully open...hence the sequel :)
But this line was amazing - He should end this right now, he should kick the little motherfucker out the door, but his tears are still wet on his cheeks, his chest feels loose and free for the first time in what seems like days, and Leo's nimble fingers are doing something absolutely amazing to his ass.
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Date: 2014-07-20 10:26 pm (UTC)Lovely little into, with just enough said to lay out the disappointment, and the isolation of such a loss. I always think that even though the team loses, the loss must be very individual, especially as Ronaldo will be 33 the next time he's on this stage.
And then Messi - I love Messi - and I really enjoyed him here. You described him perfectly - with his close-cropped hair, his incipient wrinkles, the ugly tattoo clasping the back of his bare calf. His t-shirt is plain but clean and actually fits him, clinging to the slight slopes of his pecs, the flat plane of his stomach, before it disappears beneath his shorts. But his maturity is even more evidenced by the confident way he plants his feet and by the steady gaze that he has trained on Cris, determination in his close-set brown eyes.
And then the hot, angsy sex. Nicely done! The ending was beautifully open...hence the sequel :)
But this line was amazing - He should end this right now, he should kick the little motherfucker out the door, but his tears are still wet on his cheeks, his chest feels loose and free for the first time in what seems like days, and Leo's nimble fingers are doing something absolutely amazing to his ass.
I really enjoyed this! <3