I'm so thrilled that you took the time to write again! I wasn't familiar with the original, which is weird as it was around the time we were both active in the House fandom.
Anyways - I love how you've recast it Iker/Xavi style, with enough of your own twist to create an different story. You wrote Iker's maudling very well, and set the premise up nicely with the beer and tortilla. Really enjoyed how they stumbled on this previously unknown kink accidentally, and then just went with it. You could really sense that tentativeness at the beginning, before they just went for it.
It's a pretty hot kink! "And I put it there..." Xavi continued, because above all else, he loved to find Iker's buttons and push them, and push them, and then push them again. What was even hotter was that it was working for both of them.
The last line made me giggle, and I couldn't help but wonder what either would eventually say :)
Really enjoyed it - as I always do when you write. But there is something extra special when you write these boys.
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Date: 2013-11-01 02:57 pm (UTC)Anyways - I love how you've recast it Iker/Xavi style, with enough of your own twist to create an different story. You wrote Iker's maudling very well, and set the premise up nicely with the beer and tortilla. Really enjoyed how they stumbled on this previously unknown kink accidentally, and then just went with it. You could really sense that tentativeness at the beginning, before they just went for it.
It's a pretty hot kink! "And I put it there..." Xavi continued, because above all else, he loved to find Iker's buttons and push them, and push them, and then push them again. What was even hotter was that it was working for both of them.
The last line made me giggle, and I couldn't help but wonder what either would eventually say :)
Really enjoyed it - as I always do when you write. But there is something extra special when you write these boys.