oh my goodness - yes! This is just everything I love - domestic, funny, sweet, wonderful dialogue. And did I say funny?
"What was that?" Iker asked, cupping his hand to his ear. "Were you just saying that you really wanted to sleep alone on the sofa tonight?"
"Deaf, too," Xavi grumbled, but he could feel the corner of his mouth quirking up.
"It's okay," Xavi said fondly. "You always get maudlin after sex." He paused. "Also before sex. During probably would not surprise me."
"As arousing as your insults are, I need to call it a night."
*applauds* And of course, your last line made me grin like a loon.
The hurt/comfort was perfection - I have such a thing for guys being funny while talking about what makes them sad. Always rings more true for me. And I laughed a little a the idea of Iker and Ramos heading off the Barcelona - just like that :)
If our little chats continue to inspire pieces like this, then we should never stop talking.
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"What was that?" Iker asked, cupping his hand to his ear. "Were you just saying that you really wanted to sleep alone on the sofa tonight?"
"Deaf, too," Xavi grumbled, but he could feel the corner of his mouth quirking up.
"It's okay," Xavi said fondly. "You always get maudlin after sex." He paused. "Also before sex. During probably would not surprise me."
"As arousing as your insults are, I need to call it a night."
*applauds* And of course, your last line made me grin like a loon.
The hurt/comfort was perfection - I have such a thing for guys being funny while talking about what makes them sad. Always rings more true for me. And I laughed a little a the idea of Iker and Ramos heading off the Barcelona - just like that :)
If our little chats continue to inspire pieces like this, then we should never stop talking.
WONDERFUL!!